Dreams unfold, hopes are shared
Eyes behold whilst truths are bared,
Two souls: lost in oblivion
Shattered dreams, beyond repair....
Loves lost, beyond measure.
Darkness, dreary desperation, desolation
Teary-eyed, scorning life, stating displeasure
Scathing, senseless, insecure,
Scared to spurn a friend...
To lose the love, the tenderness
Two souls.... one eyeing a dead end.
Dreams unfold,hopes are shared
Eyes behold whilst truths are bared
Two souls-lost in each other
New dreams replace shattered ones.
A new love found,to cherish forever
Reeti Roy
anupkm posted 2 hrs ago
Reeti,
It reflects so much pain, desolation, despair, disappointment, heart rending rendition of broken dreams. But life is beautiful, pleasant and it is about keeping an optimistic outlook about future.It is about overcoming obstacles and continuing your struggle and facing new challenges every day. Otherwise it will be dull, boring and not enjoyable.
Do you always write like this. Try to pen some thing about happiness, peace, nature and positive aspects of life.
regards,
Dear Anupakm,
I wrote this poem when I was sad.I think sadness is as much a part of life as happiness is..so while some of my poems will be happy...others will be peppered with sorrow.
That's only because I think my poetry is reflective of my life and my thoughts at any given point in time:)
Thanks for your comments
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Reeti,
It reflects so much pain, desolation, despair, disappointment, heart rending rendition of broken dreams. But life is beautiful, pleasant and it is about keeping an optimistic outlook about future.It is about overcoming obstacles and continuing your struggle and facing new challenges every day. Otherwise it will be dull, boring and not enjoyable.
Do you always write like this. Try to pen some thing about happiness, peace, nature and positive aspects of life.
regards,
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